A college student seeking job/ have office skills and a good salesperson

[hepburn]

To whom my concern:

I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com

thank you very much and enjoy your day

s.hepburn

[Jer]

To whom my concern:
I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com
thank you very much and enjoy your day
s.hepburn


well, i dont mean to drop it cold but maybe try spell/grammer check before you advertise for a job.

[Crazycoyo]

Have u tried the newspapers. There were like 3 or 4 postings in punch classified looking for office assit or office assitant/salesperson. I can only imagine how much are inside the Guardian or Tribune.

[Exrated]

if I was an employer and this was your resume, I would've tossed it in the shredder after the first line..

[de redhead]

well, i dont mean to drop it cold but maybe try spell/grammer check before you advertise for a job.


I don't think this is the person looking for the job, probably just a friend who has access to a computer.

[Jer]

I don't think this is the person looking for the job, probably just a friend who has access to a computer.

It still looks very bad.....:gi:

[de redhead]

It still looks very bad.....:gi:



I agree but, looking at the post leads me to think that English may not be the persons first language. At least I hope so.

[Exrated]

To whom my concern:
I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com
thank you very much and enjoy your day
s.hepburn



:shhh: :gi:

[Crazycoyo]

You guys are really mean :sarcastic

[Joe Baboon]

You guys are really mean :sarcastic

Look at it this way. If nobody had pointed out to her how terrible her post was, she wouldn't ever think to improve it. She now has a better chance with her next posting, resume, cover letter, etc. Hopefully she can learn from our criticisms.

[Crazycoyo]

Yes I know what she wrote was pretty bad but some of those comments. They were running on. One post would have been good enough. I'm defending her because I know my post here ain't any better. :voodoo: http://www.bahamasissues.com/showthread.php?t=2042

[Jer]

Yes I know what she wrote was pretty bad but some of those comments. They were running on. One post would have been good enough. I'm defending her because I know my post here ain't any better. :voodoo: http://www.bahamasissues.com/showthread.php?t=2042

:bouncy: :voodoo:

[tux]

Well i sent them a PM about it. Because I thought it would have given her time to improve her ad without someone coming to read it and see "hey my little cousin can complete a sentence better than you" or something to that effect. But now she may as well delete or erase it and start over.

I mean just look at the replies:

"well, i dont mean to drop it cold " - just wrong man

"I would've tossed it in the shredder after the first line.." - lol, but wrong none the least

"probably just a friend who has access to a computer." - tis tis

"had pointed out to her how terrible her post was" -

"but, looking at the post leads me to think that English may not be the persons first language."

[Crazycoyo]

Well one thing u have to like about these post is they are mostly anonymus :p can't spell. There hundreds of hepburns out there :)