The Look.

Spoken words,
a lonely glance,
a silent stare,
in sweet romance,
you wrote a code upon my soul,
tear drops from eyes as bright as gold.

Broken words,
you said to me,
"we're over now,
it's clear to see,
like water falls from a misted tree,
I know that we can't ever be,"

Spoken words,
a lonely glance,
a silent stare,
in sweet romance,
you wrote a code upon my soul,
tear drops from eyes as bright as gold.

Delroy Meadows ©2004

The Look.

Spoken words,
a lonely glance,
a silent stare,
in sweet romance,
you wrote a code upon my soul,
tear drops from eyes as bright as gold.

Delroy Meadows ©2004

Short but sweet, Delroy! Would make a great song if you can add some more verses.

The Look.

Spoken words,
a lonely glance,
a silent stare,
in sweet romance,
you wrote a code upon my soul,
tear drops from eyes as bright as gold.

Delroy Meadows ©2004


Can I marry you? Psych! But your poem is very beautiful in the sight that you described tears drops as being bright as gold. On the other note, your piece makes me think of two people becoming as one :cutie:

Short but sweet, Delroy! Would make a great song if you can add some more verses.

Thanks BW :D
It is a song but that's about as far as I got and I liked it.
I will add some more lines to it very soon.

Can I marry you? Psych! Almost anything is possible :)

But your poem is very beautiful in the sight that you described tears drops as being bright as gold.
Thank you so much :D
I was actually describing the eyes where the tears came from as being bright as gold. But whatever works for you :cool:

On the other note, your piece makes me think of two people becoming as one :cutie:
My thought of it is two people facing a challenging period in their marriage/relationship and they look into each other's eyes to reflect on what brought them together in the first place.

It's kinda like reminiscing http://www.bahamasissues.com/images/icons/icon11.gif

New verse added guys :)
Tell me what you think.

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Broken words,
you said to me,
"we're over now,
it's clear to see,
like water falls from a misted tree,
I know that we can't ever be,"

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

To be continued...

New verse added guys :)
Tell me what you think.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Broken words,
you said to me,
"we're over now,
it's clear to see,
like water falls from a misted tree,
I know that we can't ever be,"

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

To be continued...




:cutie: Can I really marry you Delroy? The Second verse is so pretty especially at the comparison of tears being like waterfalls from a misted tree. :cutie:

:cutie: Can I really marry you Delroy? :cutie:

I don't think that would be fair to you.
I am on the computer all the time and I don't clean my room ;)

I don't think that would be fair to you.
I am on the computer all the time and I don't clean my room ;)

I stay on the computer most of time too. But you dont clean you room? I just think you are very laid back.

I stay on the computer most of time too. But you dont clean you room? I just think you are very laid back.

Not really. It's allot of clean junk cumputer parts, books and papers.
I am just a bit disorganized in the real world but I am working on that problem.

Not really. It's allot of clean junk cumputer parts, books and papers.
I am just a bit disorganized in the real world but I am working on that problem.


Oh, that's nothing. If it's your work, then it's your work. You have to live.

:cutie: Can I really marry you Delroy? The Second verse is so pretty especially at the comparison of tears being like waterfalls from a misted tree. :cutie:


Ummm... AmericanPhemmefatale, I hate to ruin this special moment but the last time I checked, that Delroy fellow was already taken--by me, of course!!

Psych!!

Ummm... AmericanPhemmefatale, I hate to ruin this special moment but the last time I checked, that Delroy fellow was already taken--by me, of course!!

Psych!!

:o