I need you


I can’t go a day without missing you.
Can’t see your face without kissing you.
So baby this one’s for you.
I have one live, that’s reserve for us to share.
If I have one pair of shoes,
That’s for you to wear.
I’ll stop breathing just to give you air.
I gave you my heart to show you I care.
As I hold you near,
My shoulder wet as you drop a tear.
Look in your eye and stare.
Then whisper I love you in your ear.
My ambition is to please you,
If you cry, I’ll relieve you,
If you lie, I’ll believe you,
I’ll never deceive you,
Like hooked on phonics I want to read you.
Like hooked on chronics, I need you.
But to be serious I need you
Like the air I breathe too.

WOH!!! :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer:
This could have only come from your heart Mark.
I took my time reading this poem and I still am blown away by the Creative Originality in it. Really Good! :tup: :tup:


Mark I would suggest you copyright this one.

YO yo!!!!!!!!! that poem was tight!!!!!!!!!! the rythym of that poem was beautiful and i coulda sense the passionate feel of the words...

keep up the good work homeboy and trust me that gyal who gets u will be happy with those skills..she ga be smiling for years...

Rena...SPice gyal(Grenada)

i'll take your word for it, you should know.(thanks)

You'll stop breathing just to give ME air? I know you care about me Mark but goodness gracious, that's a whole lot of love coming from one man!!

Seriouly, I like your poem. It looks like it would make a nice love song, you know?

hey thanks "Kame", but for the woman i love, i would.

hey thanks "Kame", but for the woman i love, i would.

Thats my favorite poem. I wonder who it was meant for?

I always thought it was for me!

no it was not; sorry! :bye:

hey mark check out this site:


Site:
http://groups.msn.com/Spokenwordpoetsinthebahamas

it is a bahamian poetry site where you can post your poems and receive feed backs from other Bahamian poets.