A college student seeking job/ have office skills and a good salesperson

[hepburn]

To whom my concern:

I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com

thank you very much and enjoy your day

s.hepburn

[Jer]

To whom my concern:
I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com
thank you very much and enjoy your day
s.hepburn

well, i dont mean to drop it cold but maybe try spell/grammer check before you advertise for a job.

[Crazycoyo]

Have u tried the newspapers. There were like 3 or 4 postings in punch classified looking for office assit or office assitant/salesperson. I can only imagine how much are inside the Guardian or Tribune.

[Exrated]

if I was an employer and this was your resume, I would've tossed it in the shredder after the first line..

[de redhead]

well, i dont mean to drop it cold but maybe try spell/grammer check before you advertise for a job.

I don't think this is the person looking for the job, probably just a friend who has access to a computer.

[Jer]

I don't think this is the person looking for the job, probably just a friend who has access to a computer.

It still looks very bad.....

[de redhead]

It still looks very bad.....

I agree but, looking at the post leads me to think that English may not be the persons first language. At least I hope so.

[Exrated]

To whom my concern:
I am a college student that is seeking a job that can work around her school schedule. She am studying to became a doctor. She is a person who is not afraid off working, she is a hard worker, a team player, reliable and honest. etc. so can some one please help her out with a job .My email address is diva_sugar_love@hotmail.com
thank you very much and enjoy your day
s.hepburn

[Crazycoyo]

You guys are really mean

[Joe Baboon]

You guys are really mean

Look at it this way. If nobody had pointed out to her how terrible her post was, she wouldn't ever think to improve it. She now has a better chance with her next posting, resume, cover letter, etc. Hopefully she can learn from our criticisms.

[Crazycoyo]

Yes I know what she wrote was pretty bad but some of those comments. They were running on. One post would have been good enough. I'm defending her because I know my post here ain't any better. http://www.bahamasissues.com/showthread.php?t=2042

[Jer]

Yes I know what she wrote was pretty bad but some of those comments. They were running on. One post would have been good enough. I'm defending her because I know my post here ain't any better. http://www.bahamasissues.com/showthread.php?t=2042

[tux]

Well i sent them a PM about it. Because I thought it would have given her time to improve her ad without someone coming to read it and see "hey my little cousin can complete a sentence better than you" or something to that effect. But now she may as well delete or erase it and start over.

I mean just look at the replies:

"well, i dont mean to drop it cold " - just wrong man

"I would've tossed it in the shredder after the first line.." - lol, but wrong none the least

"probably just a friend who has access to a computer." - tis tis

"had pointed out to her how terrible her post was" -

"but, looking at the post leads me to think that English may not be the persons first language."

[Crazycoyo]

Well one thing u have to like about these post is they are mostly anonymus can't spell. There hundreds of hepburns out there